托福写作官方满分范文To achieve successful development of a country, a government should

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ To achieve successful development of a country， a government should spend more money on young children’s education(5-10) rather than on universities.

The progress of the country is based on education. That is, education is necessary on the way to successful development of a country. But how to use the resources well on education is a heated debate for a long time. Some people think that the elementary education is the most important than others. However, I don’t agree with the idea. There are several viewpoints presented as follows.

Admittedly, elementary educations give children a good way to improve their personality which can decide their attitude toward everything and cultivate good habit for them on daily life. Once good habit be forested, children will know how to use positive and active attitude to face many predicaments in the future, and they can know how to get along with other people then get the friendships. For example, one of my brothers Tom, who be taught to have positive thoughts to face any problems when he was young, always solved everything easily when encountering any problems. Because of his positive attitude, he acquires many admirations from his friends and classmates.

However, comparing with the young children education, I think the resources used in the universities are more efficient. The education in universities is master and irreplaceable. Many instruments which be used in experiments are so expensive and costly that they need to invest a large amount of money before they can enjoy the final sweat achievements. Moreover, some universities who devote many resources to experiments don’t require the equal results, many unexpected situations always can lead to the failure. But if they don’t spend this money, they would never have any chances to get the good achievements.

What’s more, government also should focus on the health of students, so many facilities are absolutely necessary, such as swimming poor, gymnasium and tennis court. Students can go to do exercises after classes with their friends and classmates. It is not only beneficial for their health, they also can bring up the habit to do exercise. Furthermore, unconsciously, students can learn how to cooperate with other people when playing basketball and how to persist to the end when having a Marathon.

In conclusion, form what I have discussed above, I think that all kinds of educations are important for countries. However, comparing with the primary education and universities education, the latter play a more important role.