备战2014高考英语复习书面表达复习专题06 记叙概括话题指导

专题06 记叙概括话题指导

实例指导1—记一次难忘的经历

写作技巧：在进行记叙丈体写作时，通常应把握好下几个要素：

1．人称：命题主要要求考生以第一人称或第三人进行写作的居多；第一人称主要写自己的经历，第三称则主要写他人的经历或事迹。

2．时态：由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态应以一般过去时为主(必要时可以使用其时态)。

3．写作顺序：一般按照事情发生的先后顺序进行写或叙述。

篇章结构：记叙文一般要从以下几个层面展开写：

1．简单叙述写作目的——介绍一次难忘的经历，同时可将其作为短文的主题句或主题段；

2．详细叙述事情的发生、发展和结局，这是文章的主体，要注意突出重点；

3．文章末尾可简要谈谈自己的感受或许论得与失等。

精要点拨：可将本篇作丈的写作要点归纳如下：

1．老师宣布做游戏；

2．老师在黑板上画了一张没有眼睛的脸并要求学生补画眼睛；

3．李平自愿上去；

4．李平被蒙上眼睛；

5．他把眼睛画在了额头上；

6．习作者的感悟。

【参考范文】

An Unforgettable Class

Wehad a most interesting class this morning. We became excited when Mr

Wang said, "Let's play a game together." We were eager to know what kind of game it would be.

Mr Wang said nothing but turned to the blackboard. At once a face without eyes appeared on the blackboard. "Please add the eyes to the face," Mr Wang said. Oh, what an interesting job! Li Ping volunteered to finish the task and at the same time his eyes were covered by a piece of cloth. Li Ping went to the board. We burst into laughter when he turned around. The eyes were on the forehead! How funny it looked!